I was looking at my earlier posts and I found a poem that I wrote that I'm so proud of I thought I'd post it again!
Hee, hee, hee!!!
I glide, I skate,
stretching my sore muscles.
I spin and push
the wind is in my face,
the sun on my back.
My hair springs lose
it has a mind of its own.
I turn around and go backwards...
I spin again.
right
left
right
left
I push and stretch
I spin. I miss.
I fall and the sidewalk
rises
to catch me
I land roughly.
my hands sting,
my knees ache.
I stand again.
I reach, I jump,
I soar, I fly.
Now, a poem Katie and I wrote. Some of you my recognize it. *smiles slyly*
Battle! Hear the weapons clash
hear the sound of axes smash
To strike down a brother.
Battle! Hear the blood curling cry
Hear the dying soldiers sigh
the boys who left their mothers.
Battle! They fight for right or wrong
Then they shout the battle song
Killing the one who left his lover.
Battle! Each fight for power of their own,
but then they die, and then it's gone,
and they've already killed the other.
Battle! The tear that hits the ground,
The groan, the breath and nothing found,
all so they can kill another.
Battle! Raging night and day,
It will never end, they say,
always trying to hurt each other.
HA HA! Now I've had my bragging session... time to sign off!
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I'm comenting on my own blog! Hee hee! Okay, I'm hyper. and it's not even late at night! Hoooopeeeee!
breath in - breath out. Good job.
wow.
: ).
Thanks!
I really love both of those poems MJ. Keep up the great work!!!! The second one just gives me chills every time if that tells you anything!
Hmm, I wouldn't say thanks yet Michaela, who knows what he is saying Wow for? It could be that he things you are REALLY REALLY strange, and is just blown away by your strangness. Thats the way I feel. ; )
Just Kidding : )
*smiles*
wow again.
: ) Beth, I love you.
You don't need to explain your wow, Sam, I'll take it in the best light possible : )
Actually, I decided what light to take it in.
First, you thought I was strange, now you think I'm REALLY strange!
Isn't that the best light possible??
ROTFL. Very funny Kacy!
haha!! Wow. Did I come in late in the conversation or what???
lotusoftheeveningrush.blogspot.com
That's my new address. btw.
thanks, Lindy. : )
MICHAELA!!!
GET ON BLOG AND MAKE A NEW POST!!!!!
PLEASE!
I echo Beth. . .
No post Michaela dear! I finally put one up, so it is your turn now!
Lucy, did you realize that you put "no" instead of "new"?
*points*
It's right there! There!!! Right under your name!!
*headdesk*
Never mind.
My finger itches.
*begs*
*pleads*
*tugs on MJ's sleeve*
PLEASE make a new post!! :-)
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